diff --git a/draft-ring-analyticstxt.md b/draft-ring-analyticstxt.md index 4d404d6..1b2ee75 100644 --- a/draft-ring-analyticstxt.md +++ b/draft-ring-analyticstxt.md @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ This value is not required in case the analytics software sends static resources #### Example ~~~~~~~~~~ -Stores: 1st-party-cookies, local-storage +Stores: first-party-cookies, local-storage ~~~~~~~~~~ ### Uses @@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ This OPTIONAL, RECOMMENDED multi-value field indicates whether data is shared wi ##### none -The data collected is not shared with any party unless directly affiliated with implementor. +The data collected is not shared with any party unless directly affiliated with the implementor, e.g. employees. ##### per-user @@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ Shares: general-public ### Implements -This OPTIONAL field indicates conformance with certain regulations and legislation. Values for this field SHOULD use all lowercase tokens with whitespace being replaced by the dash character (%x2d). +This OPTIONAL field indicates conformance with existing regulations and legislation. Values for this field SHOULD use all lowercase tokens with whitespace being replaced by the dash character (%x2d). This field SHOULD only be added if it makes the setup described by the file easier to understand for human users. Example values are: