From 00c28ca519c9eef48e3428a7eb057b84f6365a6b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: hendr-ik <hello@niefeld.com>
Date: Wed, 18 May 2022 17:01:12 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] copy updates

---
 homepage/content/pages/lp-access.md     | 2 +-
 homepage/theme/templates/lp-access.html | 6 +++---
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/homepage/content/pages/lp-access.md b/homepage/content/pages/lp-access.md
index 609c4ac..ec8875a 100644
--- a/homepage/content/pages/lp-access.md
+++ b/homepage/content/pages/lp-access.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-title: Let your users access their data | Offen
+title: Let your users access their data. | Offen
 description: A fair web analytics tool that treats operators and users as equal parties.
 slug: user-data-access
 template: lp-access
diff --git a/homepage/theme/templates/lp-access.html b/homepage/theme/templates/lp-access.html
index d963e9e..483ef91 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/templates/lp-access.html
+++ b/homepage/theme/templates/lp-access.html
@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
       <div class="w-100 w-80-m w-60-l">
 
         <div class="flex flex-column mt3">
-          <h1 class="f3 f2-m f2-l normal lh-title ma0 mb4">
-            Fair web analytics
+          <h1 class="f3 f2-m f2-l normal lh-title ma0 mb4 mr4 mr0-ns">
+            Let your users access their data.
           </h1>
         </div>
 
           <ul class="w-100 list pa0 ma0 mb2 mb4-ns">
             <li class="mb2">
-              Your users <i>actively give their consent and </i>have full access to their data.
+              <i>Fair web analytics. Your </i>users actively give their consent to data collection.
             </li>
             <li class="mb2">
               <i>You comply with GDPR guidelines and </i>gain insights at the same time.