From 02d55644cf6f943e8037e26aff146aa9b3d0cc75 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Hendrik Niefeld <hello@niefeld.com>
Date: Sun, 21 Jun 2020 19:53:13 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] intro update

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 homepage/content/pages/index.md     | 4 ++--
 homepage/theme/templates/index.html | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/homepage/content/pages/index.md b/homepage/content/pages/index.md
index 9cf02e4..7a76fbb 100644
--- a/homepage/content/pages/index.md
+++ b/homepage/content/pages/index.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-title: Transparent web analytics for everyone | Offen
-description: Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytics tools. Gain insights while your users have full access to their data. Self hosted, open source and free.
+title: Fair web analytics | Offen
+description: Offen is an open alternative to common web analytics tools. Gain insights while your users have full access to their data. Lightweight, self hosted and free.
 save_as: index.html
 template: index
 sitemap_priority: 1.0
diff --git a/homepage/theme/templates/index.html b/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
index a36cb41..171f6b8 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
+++ b/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
             Fair web analytics
           </h1>
           <p class="ma0 mb4">
-            Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytics tools. <span>Gain insights while your users have full access to their data. </span>Self hosted, open source and free.
+            Offen is an open alternative to common web analytics tools. <span>Gain insights while your users have full access to their data. </span>Lightweight, self hosted and free.
           </p>
           <div class="pb5 mb2">
             <a class="b link dim ph4 pv2 dib b--solid bw2 cclr-brd-black-mid cclr-fnt-black-mid" href="#bg-explainer" rel="noopener">Learn more</a>