From 465d8707b0e0a36046e4ebb74bf7e463f3be49d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Hendrik Niefeld <hello@niefeld.com>
Date: Tue, 28 Apr 2020 15:51:34 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] text updates, minor layout tweaks

---
 homepage/pelicanconf.py                  |  2 +-
 homepage/theme/static/css/fix.css        |  3 +++
 homepage/theme/templates/getstarted.html |  2 +-
 homepage/theme/templates/index.html      | 14 +++++++-------
 homepage/theme/templates/trydemo.html    |  2 +-
 5 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/homepage/pelicanconf.py b/homepage/pelicanconf.py
index e2f07b7..60f0ebb 100644
--- a/homepage/pelicanconf.py
+++ b/homepage/pelicanconf.py
@@ -77,6 +77,6 @@ TWITTER_URL = 'https://twitter.com/hioffen'
 RELEASE_DIRECT_URL = 'https://get.offen.dev'
 DOCKER_DIRECT_URL = 'https://hub.docker.com/r/offen/offen'
 HEROKU_DIRECT_URL = 'https://heroku.com/deploy?template=https://github.com/offen/heroku/tree/master'
-OFFEN_AUDITORIUM_URL = 'https://analytics.offen.dev/'
+OFFEN_AUDITORIUM_URL = 'https://analytics.offen.dev/auditorium'
 
 OFFEN_ACCOUNT_ID = os.environ.get('OFFEN_ACCOUNT_ID', None)
diff --git a/homepage/theme/static/css/fix.css b/homepage/theme/static/css/fix.css
index 5e6cc2a..fe042f0 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/static/css/fix.css
+++ b/homepage/theme/static/css/fix.css
@@ -290,6 +290,9 @@ i {
 	font-style: normal;
 	color: #777777;
 }
+.i-on-yellow {
+	color: #8c7839;
+}
 .inner-shaddow {
 	box-shadow: inset 0px 0px 4px 0px rgba(0,0,0,0.75);
 }
diff --git a/homepage/theme/templates/getstarted.html b/homepage/theme/templates/getstarted.html
index 2a8011a..50eacfb 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/templates/getstarted.html
+++ b/homepage/theme/templates/getstarted.html
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
         Get started
       </h2>
       <h3 class="f25 f2-ns normal ma0 mb5 mh6-ns">
-        Choose your favorite way to self host Offen
+        Choose your preferred way to self host Offen
       </h3>
 
       <div class="flex flex-column items-center">
diff --git a/homepage/theme/templates/index.html b/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
index 475f7dd..892ac0d 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
+++ b/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
@@ -145,13 +145,13 @@
               </div>
               <div class="w-80 mt4">
                 <p class="ma0 ml3">
-                  Self host <i>Offen and thereby comply with GDPR guidelines.</i>
+                  Self host <i>Offen in compliance with GDPR guidelines.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 ml3 mt4">
                   <i>Integrate the</i> code snippet <i>into pages you want to track.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 ml3 mt4">
-                  <i>Make your</i> users aware <i>of the access to their data.</i>
+                  <i>Make your</i> users aware <i>of the ability to access their data.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 ml3 mt4 mb5">
                   <i>Improve your services with</i> fair and transparent insights.
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
                   Review own data <i>with detailed explanations of metrics and terms.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 ml3 mt4">
-                  Only delete usage data <i>or opt out completly at any time.</i>
+                  Opt out completely <i>at any time or only delete existing usage data.</i>
                 </p>
 
               </div>
@@ -357,16 +357,16 @@
               </div>
               <div class="w-80 mt4">
                 <p class="ma0">
-                  All your accounts can be shared <i>within your team.</i>
+                  All your accounts can be shared <i class="i-on-yellow">within your team.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 mt4">
-                  <i>User data is only</i> stored for 6 months <i>and then deleted.</i>
+                  <i class="i-on-yellow">User</i> data is only stored for 6 months <i class="i-on-yellow">and then deleted.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 mt4">
-                  <i>Use the</i> in-browser screen <i>for an more intuitive setup.</i>
+                  <i class="i-on-yellow">Use the</i> in-browser screen <i class="i-on-yellow">for a more intuitive setup.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 mt4 mb5">
-                  <i>A</i> detailed documentation <i>on how to run Offen is available.</i>
+                  <i class="i-on-yellow">A</i> detailed documentation <i class="i-on-yellow">on how to run Offen is available.</i>
                 </p>
               </div>
             </div>
diff --git a/homepage/theme/templates/trydemo.html b/homepage/theme/templates/trydemo.html
index f79dd59..8dce667 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/templates/trydemo.html
+++ b/homepage/theme/templates/trydemo.html
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
       <div class="flex flex-column items-center">
         <div class="w-100 ph4 pv2 mb5 inner-shaddow bg-gray">
           <code class="ma0 lh-solid word-wrap white">
-            curl https://demo.offen.dev | sh
+            curl https://demo.offen.dev | bash
           </code>
         </div>
       </div>