From a3438772c87fcb620e41f57032c8a5f4c820a876 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hendrik Niefeld Date: Tue, 17 Mar 2020 06:44:23 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] minor text updates --- homepage/content/articles/0040-test-offen-today.md | 2 +- homepage/content/pages/index.md | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/homepage/content/articles/0040-test-offen-today.md b/homepage/content/articles/0040-test-offen-today.md index caebb77..7020266 100644 --- a/homepage/content/articles/0040-test-offen-today.md +++ b/homepage/content/articles/0040-test-offen-today.md @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ We’re excited to present our first version that is officially ready for testin After we released our initial Offen v0.1.0-alpha.1 in January this year, we've been busy working on a successor version for the last six weeks. Based on the initial feedback, we have made major adjustments in the front and backend area. -We believe with these updates Offen has reached a level of functionality and stability that is ready for public testing. Your feedback is helping us take a step forward on our way to developing *a viable alternative to established web analytic tools.* +We believe with these updates Offen has reached a level of functionality and stability that is ready for public testing. Your feedback is helping us take a step forward on our way to developing *a viable alternative to established web analytics tools.* Although we have dug very deep, things may still contain issues. Therefore, we recommend using Offen in a production environment only for the brave. Also be aware that the upgrade path may be broken with upcoming releases. diff --git a/homepage/content/pages/index.md b/homepage/content/pages/index.md index c66e5a6..035080a 100644 --- a/homepage/content/pages/index.md +++ b/homepage/content/pages/index.md @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ save_as: index.html template: index sitemap_priority: 1.0 -Offen is a web analytics software that gives users access to the data they are generating. Not only operators running sites or applications are given able to use the analytics tools, but also _the users themselves are granted access to and ownership of their data._ +Offen is a web analytics software that gives users access to the data they are generating. Not only operators running sites or applications are able to use the analytics tools, but also _the users themselves are granted access to their data._ -Usage metrics come with explanations about their meaning, relevance, usage and possible privacy implications. Offen also details _which kind of data is not collected._ All data can be deleted selectively or in its entirety by the users, or the collection can be disabled altogether. +Usage metrics come with explanations about their meaning, relevance, usage and possible privacy implications. Offen also details _which kind of data is not collected._ All data can be deleted by the users or the collection can be disabled altogether. Offen treats both users and operators as parties of equal importance. Users can expect full transparency and are encouraged to make _autonomous and informed decisions regarding the use of their data._ Operators are enabled to gain insights while respecting their users' privacy and data.