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 title: Transparent web analytics for everyone | Offen
-description: Offen is a free and open source analytics software for websites and web applications. Users can access their data while the operators treat it with respect.
+description: Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytic tools. Respect your users while gaining insight into their behavior. Self hosted, open source and free.
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-            Offen is an open source analytics software for websites <span>and web applications. It allows respectful handling of data </span> <span>for operators and users.</span>
+            Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytic tools. <span>Pay respect to your users while gaining insight into their behavior. </span>Self hosted, open source and free.
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-              <em>Free & Open</em>
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-              Anyone can audit our open source code to verify it works as intended. Offen will always be available for free.
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