From c998a8fb904b52c2d24f939656dd14667bdfef7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Hendrik Niefeld <hello@niefeld.com>
Date: Tue, 28 Apr 2020 19:28:35 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] text updates

---
 homepage/content/pages/index.md     |  2 +-
 homepage/theme/templates/base.html  |  2 +-
 homepage/theme/templates/index.html | 18 +++++++++---------
 3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/homepage/content/pages/index.md b/homepage/content/pages/index.md
index 59a5ab2..5b3ba1c 100644
--- a/homepage/content/pages/index.md
+++ b/homepage/content/pages/index.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 title: Transparent web analytics for everyone | Offen
-description: Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytics tools. Respect your users while gaining insight into their behavior. Self hosted, open source and free.
+description: Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytics tools. Respect your users and gain insight at the same time. Self hosted, open source and free.
 save_as: index.html
 template: index
 sitemap_priority: 1.0
diff --git a/homepage/theme/templates/base.html b/homepage/theme/templates/base.html
index 182455e..b740bb2 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/templates/base.html
+++ b/homepage/theme/templates/base.html
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
                   <p class="ma0 mb3">
                     Discover what is already up and running and where we want to go.
                   </p>
-                  <a class="b link dim ph4 pv2 dib b--solid bw2 cclr-brd-black-mid cclr-fnt-black-mid" href="/blog/">Open blog</a>
+                  <a class="b link dim ph4 pv2 dib b--solid bw2 cclr-brd-black-mid cclr-fnt-black-mid" href="/blog/">Open Blog</a>
                 </div>
                 {% endif %}
 
diff --git a/homepage/theme/templates/index.html b/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
index 892ac0d..01efa0d 100644
--- a/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
+++ b/homepage/theme/templates/index.html
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
             Transparent <span>web analytics</span>
           </h1>
           <p class="ma0 mb4">
-            Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytics tools. <span>Pay respect to your users while gaining insight into their behavior. </span>Self hosted, open source and free.
+            Offen is a fair alternative to common web analytics tools. <span>Respect your users and gain insight at the same time. </span>Self hosted, open source and free.
           </p>
           <div class="pb5 mb2">
             <a class="b link dim ph4 pv2 dib b--solid bw2 cclr-brd-black-mid cclr-fnt-black-mid" href="#bg-explainer" rel="noopener">Learn more</a>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
               </em>
             </h2>
             <p class="wx18 center ma0">
-              Pay respect <i>to your website visitors. Gain valuable insights at the same time. All data is</i> encrypted end-to-end.
+              Pay respect <i>to your website visitors. Get valuable insights at the same time. All data is</i> encrypted end-to-end.
             </p>
             </div>
 
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
                   <i>Make your</i> users aware <i>of the ability to access their data.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 ml3 mt4 mb5">
-                  <i>Improve your services with</i> fair and transparent insights.
+                  <i>Improve your service with</i> fair and transparent insights.
                 </p>
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
                   Review own data <i>with detailed explanations of metrics and terms.</i>
                 </p>
                 <p class="ma0 ml3 mt4">
-                  Opt out completely <i>at any time or only delete existing usage data.</i>
+                  <i>Opt out completely at any time or only</i> delete existing usage data.
                 </p>
 
               </div>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
                 Data of all pages where your Offen installation is active.
               </p>
               <p class="ma0 mb4 gray">
-                For example:
+                For example
               </p>
 
               <!-- BOX -->
@@ -241,13 +241,13 @@
                 </div>
 
                 <p class="f25 lh-solid ma0 mb2">
-                  478
+                  859
                 </p>
                 <p class="f7 lh-solid ma0 mb4">
                   Unique users
                 </p>
                 <p class="f25 lh-solid ma0 mb2">
-                  2.530
+                  3.372
                 </p>
                 <p class="f7 lh-solid ma0 mb4">
                   Unique sessions
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@
                 Data of all pages a user has visited where your Offen installation is active.
               </p>
               <p class="ma0 mb4 gray">
-                For example:
+                For example
               </p>
 
               <!-- BOX -->
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@
                   1
                 </p>
                 <p class="f7 lh-solid ma0 mb4">
-                  Unique websites
+                  Unique website
                 </p>
                 <p class="f25 lh-solid ma0 mb2">
                   5